Jodie’s Story: ‘This is just to say’ Sunday, 14 March 2010
Posted by edincityoflit in Stories.Tags: William Carlos Williams
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My name is Jodie and i am in S2 in Queensferry High School.
This is just to say
I have eaten
The plums
That were in
The iceboxAnd which
You were probably
Saving
For breakfastForgive me
They were delicious
So sweet
And so cold.
I like this poem because…..
It is rotten like a letter telling someone that the are sorry for eating the plums and they liked them and they hoping that the owner of the plums would forgive them.
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