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Jodie’s Story: ‘This is just to say’ Sunday, 14 March 2010

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My name is Jodie and i am in S2 in Queensferry High School.

This is just to say

I have eaten
The plums
That were in
The icebox

And which
You were probably
Saving
For breakfast

Forgive me
They were delicious
So sweet
And so cold.

I like this poem because…..

It is rotten like a letter telling someone that the are sorry for eating the plums and they liked them and they hoping that the owner of the plums would forgive them.

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